After Charles VIII himself made her his wife

Question

Is it possible to translate this as:Après que CharlesVIII lui-même lui en fit son épouse. As the sentence was that he made her his wife ?

Accepted Answer

Bonjour Pamela !
There are a few issues with your proposition :)
après que Charles VIII lui-même lui en fit son épouse. 
-> Here you're using 2 pronouns to refer to "her" so it's at best redundant. You would definitely not use "lui".
après que Charles VIII lui-même lui en fit son épouse.
-> The issue with using "en" is that you wouldn't use it to refer to a person, but rather an object/animal.
See our lesson: En can replace de + [phrase]
Therefore, the correct option here would be:
après que Charles VIII lui-même fit d'elle son épouse.
I hope that's helpful!
Bonne journée !